tehblob
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Joined: 12/21/08
Location: France
Posts: 112
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i agree with the long shots being a tad bit too long, but apart from that, it was awesome, I especially liked the part where the "person" gets shot, and doesn't feel anything, while the song goes "i don't... feel", etc. Maybe try to match the shots with the rhythm of the music, like when the two guys run in front of the camera, it would've been nice to make them each run at the beginning of a measure.
But seriously, some shots were well made with the colors and everything, and I look forward to seeing the rest of the series.
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