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03/13/12 11:41 AM
sithlordjp member This is Thunderdome! Joined: 11/16/08 Posts: 948	. Edited 1 time(s). Last edit at 01/16/2013 08:31AM by sithlordjp.
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03/14/12 2:05 PM
sithlordjp member This is Thunderdome! Joined: 11/16/08 Posts: 948	. Edited 1 time(s). Last edit at 01/16/2013 08:31AM by sithlordjp.
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03/19/12 9:20 AM
sithlordjp member This is Thunderdome! Joined: 11/16/08 Posts: 948	. Edited 1 time(s). Last edit at 01/16/2013 08:31AM by sithlordjp.
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03/20/12 7:15 AM
ghostshot member Joined: 10/28/10 Location: Carbon County Posts: 328	sithlordjp posted: POOL IS UNSUPERVISED Reach the deep end and win a prize Diving head first might be unwise Let the truth of chlorine burn your eyes The girl on the springboard leads to vice Barely a wave inside my head No need to swim when all is said Can all this water be in my bed Or simply the memory of the undead? Steam rises Whirlpool lies She disappears under She gets closer Nautical predator A million ways better I stop moving I stop struggling I feel myself slipping I feel myself sinking The pool is unsupervised. March 13th 2012. EXCELLENT...the'out-of-towners',enjoyed very well..
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03/20/12 9:16 AM
sithlordjp member This is Thunderdome! Joined: 11/16/08 Posts: 948	Thank you ghostshot! ********************** Edited 1 time(s). Last edit at 01/16/2013 08:32AM by sithlordjp.
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03/21/12 4:11 PM
sithlordjp member This is Thunderdome! Joined: 11/16/08 Posts: 948	. Edited 1 time(s). Last edit at 01/16/2013 08:32AM by sithlordjp.
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03/21/12 6:43 PM
sithlordjp member This is Thunderdome! Joined: 11/16/08 Posts: 948	. Edited 1 time(s). Last edit at 01/16/2013 08:32AM by sithlordjp.
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03/23/12 6:34 AM
anew member Versions of Rilke Joined: 09/27/09 Posts: 1,565	Nice to read your writing I liked freeform needlepointing with reach out and closer
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03/26/12 1:16 PM
sithlordjp member This is Thunderdome! Joined: 11/16/08 Posts: 948	thank you anew !
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03/26/12 1:27 PM
sithlordjp member This is Thunderdome! Joined: 11/16/08 Posts: 948	. Edited 1 time(s). Last edit at 01/16/2013 08:32AM by sithlordjp.
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03/26/12 8:49 PM
Rogue1 member Joined: 08/08/09 Posts: 11,632	This is wonderful, JP!
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03/27/12 2:29 AM
ghostshot member Joined: 10/28/10 Location: Carbon County Posts: 328	sithlordjp posted: She She makes me want to say Words of yesterday She makes me want to say Tales of love kept at bay Her beauty burns me Her beauty... heals me She makes me want to write A letter to see her light She makes me want to right Things kept out of sight Her name Her flame She makes me She undoes me She rebuilds me She will be... I want to be near And forget this fear I am still Waiting Dreaming Quietly imagining I walk to this place where I first saw her Somehow I know I should walk faster And there, before me, She Always the best stuff...
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04/05/12 2:38 PM
sithlordjp member This is Thunderdome! Joined: 11/16/08 Posts: 948	Thank you Rogue, thank you ghostshot... ************************************** Edited 1 time(s). Last edit at 01/16/2013 08:32AM by sithlordjp.
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04/10/12 11:54 AM
sithlordjp member This is Thunderdome! Joined: 11/16/08 Posts: 948	. Edited 1 time(s). Last edit at 01/16/2013 08:33AM by sithlordjp.
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04/11/12 6:43 AM
sithlordjp member This is Thunderdome! Joined: 11/16/08 Posts: 948	. Edited 1 time(s). Last edit at 01/16/2013 08:33AM by sithlordjp.
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04/13/12 9:22 AM
Rogue1 member Joined: 08/08/09 Posts: 11,632	I do love these "Conversations".
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04/16/12 6:09 AM
sithlordjp member This is Thunderdome! Joined: 11/16/08 Posts: 948	Thanks Rogue1 ! I like writing these characters. I have the feeling they'll have more to say in the future !!!
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04/16/12 2:20 PM
sithlordjp member This is Thunderdome! Joined: 11/16/08 Posts: 948	. Edited 1 time(s). Last edit at 01/16/2013 08:33AM by sithlordjp.
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04/16/12 2:45 PM
sithlordjp member This is Thunderdome! Joined: 11/16/08 Posts: 948	. Edited 1 time(s). Last edit at 01/16/2013 08:33AM by sithlordjp.
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04/16/12 4:16 PM
N_ member Je suis perdue! Joined: 11/04/08 Location: The nicest parts of hell. Posts: 506	sithlordjp posted: A witch to watch She told me we'd meet again I was just a boy back then She told me a secret I was caught in her net The knowledge to change Was within range The will to heal Was mine to feel Doomsday for the poor Blood about to pour A kind soul Answers in a bowl A witch is here I feel no fear I watch the signs A string of lines Ya, I do like this one best. "Answers in a bowl" sounds like something I would see in a bowl of alphabet soup. LOL... great reading from you.
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04/17/12 8:20 AM
sithlordjp member This is Thunderdome! Joined: 11/16/08 Posts: 948	Thank you kindly N_ !!! **************************** . Edited 1 time(s). Last edit at 01/16/2013 08:33AM by sithlordjp.
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04/17/12 3:30 PM
Gato_Preto member is a perverted neutrino Joined: 11/18/08 Location: %3D%28%5E.%5E%29%3D Posts: 259	sithlordjp posted: The night is younger than I remembered Perhaps it has something to do with you The Devil is dismembered We are now the chosen few… April 17th 2012. Indeed...lovely composition...really like it
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04/20/12 7:52 AM
sithlordjp member This is Thunderdome! Joined: 11/16/08 Posts: 948	Thank you Gato_Preto ! Glad you liked that one ! ************************ . Edited 1 time(s). Last edit at 01/16/2013 08:34AM by sithlordjp.
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04/20/12 8:09 AM
sentient02970 member Joined: 11/27/07 Location: Vermont Posts: 522	Untold is a beautifully mysterious piece. I can feel myself fading into every stanza and sensing the emotion in your images, thoughts. It's some very good poetry right there. thanks for sharing it.
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04/23/12 7:46 AM
sithlordjp member This is Thunderdome! Joined: 11/16/08 Posts: 948	Thank you for reading and for the kind words sir. ************************************************ Edited 1 time(s). Last edit at 01/16/2013 08:34AM by sithlordjp.
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04/24/12 11:00 AM
sithlordjp member This is Thunderdome! Joined: 11/16/08 Posts: 948	. Edited 1 time(s). Last edit at 01/16/2013 08:34AM by sithlordjp.
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04/26/12 10:02 AM
sithlordjp member This is Thunderdome! Joined: 11/16/08 Posts: 948	. Edited 1 time(s). Last edit at 01/16/2013 08:35AM by sithlordjp.
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04/26/12 11:02 AM
Rogue1 member Joined: 08/08/09 Posts: 11,632	^^ You ending there was unexpected but extremely clever. Got a big silly smile out of me. Always enjoy your writings, JP.
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04/27/12 2:01 PM
sithlordjp member This is Thunderdome! Joined: 11/16/08 Posts: 948	^_^ Thanks Rogue ! Silly smiles are fun ! ********************* Edited 1 time(s). Last edit at 01/16/2013 08:35AM by sithlordjp.
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04/27/12 2:19 PM
sithlordjp member This is Thunderdome! Joined: 11/16/08 Posts: 948	. Edited 1 time(s). Last edit at 01/16/2013 08:35AM by sithlordjp.
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