[Make Her Real]

Page: < First... 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 ...Last >

08/07/10 1:54 PM
SunshineGirl member solntse vizhu! Joined: 10/27/08 Location: Texas Posts: 2,068	[Shower] I can hear you singing But I can't feel your song You tell me everything's alright But it's seeming like you're wrong I've got these scars on my fingers That remind me of what I did I've got this hate in my eyes That reminds me of the love you hid If I'm your princess Why do you put me in danger? If I've longg forgotten Why is there still such anger?
Profile	back to top

08/07/10 5:02 PM
EbonyGrlChi member Joined: 04/10/10 Location: Atlanta Ga at present tim Posts: 108	WOW!!! Is all that i can say. Happened to come across this page and started reading some of you poem's. Just wanted to say that they are beautiful. You express so many emotion's in them. Wish that i was that good at putting my emotion's into word's. You have a gift.
Profile	back to top

08/14/10 8:14 AM
SunshineGirl member solntse vizhu! Joined: 10/27/08 Location: Texas Posts: 2,068	^Thank you so much! =] [Study] "It keeps me sane" You say it like you mean it, and it's a lie, over and over. Never anything different.
Profile	back to top

08/14/10 8:16 AM
SunshineGirl member solntse vizhu! Joined: 10/27/08 Location: Texas Posts: 2,068	[Adult] Such white walls Such green grass Such pretty flowers Such warm afternoons Such a dark house Where lights are unwelcome Because of bad memories Flashbacks That awaken the little girl inside That should have grown up by now Still frightened And so full of angst So frustrated It should have been figured out by now She should know what this means No matter the motives She ought to be able To read the faces and know Before it's spoken.
Profile	back to top

08/18/10 11:47 AM
SunshineGirl member solntse vizhu! Joined: 10/27/08 Location: Texas Posts: 2,068	[Given] You said, "Let's prove them wrong!" It sounded good to me But it's hard when they're right But it's hard when there's nothing to fight for But it's hard when you're not even mine I should know by now That nobody would choose me.
Profile	back to top

08/18/10 9:49 PM
Agonistic member Joined: 08/17/10 Posts: 12	Oh my word, you are veryy veryy talented. You work touches me deeply. I have also been through some pretty trying times at a young age and the best peices of advice i can give you is to just be you. Be true to yourself and be happy with yourself. You're very talented and i'm looking forward to reading more of your work.
Profile	back to top

08/22/10 1:51 PM
SunshineGirl member solntse vizhu! Joined: 10/27/08 Location: Texas Posts: 2,068	^Thank you. That means a lot. =] [Even] I have been told that innocence Can be regained But you have to Cut it off Whatever harmed you Betrayed you What does one do When it is not one that harmed Oneself? What does one do When innocence has been Stolen? What is one to do With you?
Profile	back to top

08/26/10 8:01 PM
SunshineGirl member solntse vizhu! Joined: 10/27/08 Location: Texas Posts: 2,068	[Awkward Letter] The ringing in my ears Is even louder than your screams But only just what's left behind Of all the things that could have happened Ohh what could've been Should I care? Do I? Really? Would we really have ended up Walking through a church Through life Together But what's the point Really?
Profile	back to top

08/28/10 6:20 PM
SunshineGirl member solntse vizhu! Joined: 10/27/08 Location: Texas Posts: 2,068	[to Strangle] If only I could escape this flesh If only I could see through the eyes of silly mortal man If only my hand would stop twitching so I might touch you as delicately as I ought But you know, my princess, none of this is my fault It's the Disease! the Disease! You know that I love you And I know you love me.
Profile	back to top

09/04/10 10:29 AM
SunshineGirl member solntse vizhu! Joined: 10/27/08 Location: Texas Posts: 2,068	[Grau] I treat ev'ry word As if it's a miracle How's that make you feel?
Profile	back to top

09/15/10 7:16 PM

SunshineGirl

member

solntse vizhu!

Joined: 10/27/08

Location: Texas

Posts: 2,068

[Incident: Coexist]
She sat down next to him in the library, quietly.
He was typing away, loudly.
He looked at her, eyes almost apologetic.
In broken forced English, he said,
     "Apologies. Much work."
She grinned
     "I can dig it,"
her eyes replied.
          A smile crept onto his face.
He went back to his typing, quickly.
She opened her book, slowly,
          and read to the rhythm of his fingers.

Edited 1 time(s). Last edit at 09/15/2010 07:11PM by SunshineGirl.

Profile

back to top

09/22/10 7:37 PM

SunshineGirl

member

solntse vizhu!

Joined: 10/27/08

Location: Texas

Posts: 2,068

[More or Less]
From the braid in her hair
To her dirty little feet
From the way she moves
To the way she speaks
   Everything screams
   Yeah, it screams

From the love in her heart
To the scabs on her knees
From the pain in her head
To the way she perceives
   Everything screams
   Yeah, it screams:

She's not one of us
Something more
Something less
She's not one of us
Who she is
Well
We can only guess.

Profile

back to top

09/25/10 4:07 PM
SunshineGirl member solntse vizhu! Joined: 10/27/08 Location: Texas Posts: 2,068	[I Still Try (a lyric)] Down in my little hole I look up and I see all the colors up above I don't know what it means What it could be I think it's Laughter and love and life and light Laughter and love and life and light Laughter and love and life and light And all I do is stare Down in my little hole all I do is stare Down in my little hole I hear all the others play I don't know what it means What it could be I think it's Laughter and love and life and light Laughter and love and life and light Laughter and love and life and light And all I do is scream Down in my little hole all I do is scream I don't know why I don't know why I don't know why But I still try Down in my little hole all I do is stare Down in my little hole all I do is stare Down in my little hole all I do is scream
Profile	back to top

09/25/10 4:10 PM
SunshineGirl member solntse vizhu! Joined: 10/27/08 Location: Texas Posts: 2,068	[Song] I shined when the clouds were black and heavy I shined when the rain almost drowned us I shined when the Sun turned its back on us I shined when the darkness started closing in And now the sky is clear And now we can breathe freely And now sunlight comes in And now it is not dark And now I burn out, Used up, Useless, And now I'm worthless.
Profile	back to top

09/28/10 6:35 PM
SunshineGirl member solntse vizhu! Joined: 10/27/08 Location: Texas Posts: 2,068	[Doctor (a lyric)] Mama doesn't think I can And papa doesn't even know who I am They don't know what I can become Maybe they'll see before their days are done But I need this to live Need this one for me They don't know what this means Don't know how often it's been in my dreams 'Cause mama doesn't seem to hear me And papa hasn't been anywhere near me But I need this to live Need this one for me Mama doesn't think I can And papa doesn't even know who I am They don't know what I have become Maybe they'll see before my days are done.
Profile	back to top

10/03/10 9:18 PM
SunshineGirl member solntse vizhu! Joined: 10/27/08 Location: Texas Posts: 2,068	For my Creative Writing class, we had to write a story about why Mona Lisa is smiling. Here's my version. [Mona Lisa] He had been wanting to paint me for several months, and I wanted him to paint me, but I had been very busy. A helpless husband, helpless children, a helpless household. That day, I finally had some free time. I went to the painter and asked if he would like to paint me. He answered with a delighted "yes". He led me to the room in which he would paint my portrait and told me to make myself comfortable. "I want to really get to know you first," he explained, "so I can portray you properly." We started talking. He asked me a few simple questions at first. "Where are you from originally?" "What is your family like?" Before I knew it, I was telling him everything. My hopes and dreams. My every thought. And he seemed genuinely interested. I was not used to this. My husband never acts like that anymore. I hadn't seen such love in a man's eyes in years. When there was nothing left of my story to tell, he asked if I had any questions for him. I was silent a moment, thinking. "Why?" I asked. "Why do you want to paint me? Surely there are better subjects? Women with skin much fairer, hands much more delicate, eyes much brighter." "No," he replied. "There are none better than you! Your skin is golden, like your heart. Your hands are worn because you've labored for you family. In your eyes, there is a fire, that cannot be extinguished. No, no, there are none better than you!" I didn't know what to say. He spoke as if he thought me beautiful. I never thought of myself this way. I always refused to. In the beginning, my husband, very lovingly, tried to convince me of my beauty. In the beginning. As I said, I was quite speechless. For a moment, he simply gazed at me. I blushed. I felt my ears burning. I suppose he noticed I was becoming embarassed, for he asked if I would like to get started. I nodded. I followed him to the other side of the room, where there was a stool in front of a window. In front of the stool, he had his things set up. He asked me to take a seat. As I sat down, he went to the canvas and started choosing brushes, mixing paints. I sat uncomfortably, rigidly, unsure of how to pose. "Relax," he said. "I'm sorry," I responded. "I just...how do you want me to sit?" "It's up to you. Just please, don't look like this is such torture!" he teased. I took a deep breath. "Alright," he said gently. "Start with your shoulders. Relax them a bit." I tried to loosen up. "Good. You still look so serious, though. I don't want serious. I want happy, I want love. Pretend you love me." To pretend was unnecessary. I wanted to say so, but I held my tongue. However, he looked up just in time to see my face change. He noticed the smile. "Perfect," he whispered, and began painting.
Profile	back to top

10/12/10 6:24 PM
SunshineGirl member solntse vizhu! Joined: 10/27/08 Location: Texas Posts: 2,068	[Traum] If this dream is shared Why can't it come true? The touches told everything We wanted We needed To know. The bruises bring such joy And my whimpers of pain... I see the look on your face This is real So Why are we still dreaming?
Profile	back to top

10/24/10 4:45 PM
SunshineGirl member solntse vizhu! Joined: 10/27/08 Location: Texas Posts: 2,068	This one I wrote for my English class. It's about Blixa Bargeld [<33]. [bb.chaucer] A man named Blixa came with us as well. What this name meant, none of us could tell. He was from an island, this is what he said, Named West Berlin, where everyone was dead. He spoke hatefully of that cursed Wall, And prophesized often how it would fall. His appearance was one that haunts me yet. How emaciated he was! I cannot forget. It looked as though he had pulled out his hair, And we never could escape his hollow stare. In his native German, he sang quite often, And only then did his hard face soften. Of what he sang exactly, I will never know, But with his melodic shrieks, he put on quite a show. This young man baffled me, but this I understood: Singing in German does an angry heart good.
Profile	back to top

10/31/10 7:00 PM
SunshineGirl member solntse vizhu! Joined: 10/27/08 Location: Texas Posts: 2,068	[Hallow] A rose called by any other name is just as sweet unless it shares it's name with you But I'd do anything you asked me to You know I know You do And then the light burst forth Came out of hiding It'd been waiting Like I know I knew But for you Anything Absolutely
Profile	back to top

10/31/10 7:46 PM
flamenwerfer member Joined: 03/06/09 Posts: 1,360	Simply beautiful! <3
Profile	back to top

11/01/10 7:09 PM
SunshineGirl member solntse vizhu! Joined: 10/27/08 Location: Texas Posts: 2,068	[Porcelain Doll] Keep my mama tied up for me Keep her in her padded cell Keep her too tired to topple over If she breaks, all Hell is unleashed You can teach her better You've taught her well Keep my mama drunk and broken Bent over in the shower Drain her of consciousness, pump her full of meds If she wakes, my Heaven is shattered You are all I need, you are my mama and my papa You hold all the power And I bow down, papa.
Profile	back to top

11/01/10 7:10 PM
SunshineGirl member solntse vizhu! Joined: 10/27/08 Location: Texas Posts: 2,068	flamenwerfer posted: Simply beautiful! <3 ^_^
Profile	back to top

11/01/10 9:04 PM
JohnyCleaver member Joined: 11/01/10 Location: Mo Posts: 21	Hey this is extremely good. I love the seventh stanza, particularly about the stars being eyes.
Profile	back to top

11/02/10 8:13 PM
SunshineGirl member solntse vizhu! Joined: 10/27/08 Location: Texas Posts: 2,068	^Thank you. =] [Nakonets] Don't hope Can't move You know there's nothing Nothing to do Something won't work You know you're useless Useless to think Helpless to try You know we're dead.
Profile	back to top

11/04/10 1:39 PM
ghostshot member Joined: 10/28/10 Location: Carbon County Posts: 328	I have just finished reading your entire post,many of your writings...I can place myself into,others,I can see how you could place me in them. Your gift has grown and evolved over the past years. Wish I could say the same for myself. Please,continue with your workings...
Profile	back to top

11/08/10 11:20 PM
N_ member Je suis perdue! Joined: 11/04/08 Location: The nicest parts of hell. Posts: 506	SunshineGirl posted: [Traum] If this dream is shared Why can't it come true? The touches told everything We wanted We needed To know. The bruises bring such joy And my whimpers of pain... I see the look on your face This is real So Why are we still dreaming? I love this... I know this! I have missed you, Sunshine. I hope that you are doing well. I am ok...still!
Profile	back to top

11/11/10 7:00 PM
SunshineGirl member solntse vizhu! Joined: 10/27/08 Location: Texas Posts: 2,068	ghostshot: Thank you. =] N_: Aw, thanks. I am doing quite well. Glad you're alright! =]
Profile	back to top

11/13/10 3:15 PM
SunshineGirl member solntse vizhu! Joined: 10/27/08 Location: Texas Posts: 2,068	[T.W.L.O.H.A.] You can't be fixed Dearest, you're not broken I pray for you everyday Pray you be awoken The word "LOVE" is written For you on my arm So that you might know You deserve no more harm Put down the blade And look in the mirror Just cry your tears So you might see clearer There are problems There's more than one solution Dearest, you're not flawed You've already achieved perfection <3
Profile	back to top

11/14/10 12:03 PM
SunshineGirl member solntse vizhu! Joined: 10/27/08 Location: Texas Posts: 2,068	[The River] Silence burned these bridges Though I built them of stone. There was nothing left to say. Now here we stand. I see you On the other side. The river flows fast between us. Ashes in the air Cover up the sun. Feel the acid rain fall down upon us. Feel this silence Burn our skin. The clouds descend. The river rises. We are caught and separated. Silence burned these bridges; It will Crush our lungs; It will Break our bones; It will Get inside our heads, Stop our thoughts, Tie our tongues. Silence Will make us Silent. Silently We will burn, As our bridges before us. We will collapse Into the river. And nobody will know.
Profile	back to top

11/14/10 12:35 PM
ghostshot member Joined: 10/28/10 Location: Carbon County Posts: 328	The River....I think I lived this one...maybe more then once,nice works.
Profile	back to top