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04/30/10 11:43 PM
torturedpoet member Take me to your leader. Joined: 09/05/08 Location: Space Posts: 1,191	Wrote this one yesterday evening: ‘Swine’ We are the swine We are the swarm Heed the plague As it ingests the vital fluids And watch you shrivel It will rip you apart Taste the torn skin The flesh burning Incense burning And wilting 30th April 2010
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07/13/10 11:55 PM
torturedpoet member Take me to your leader. Joined: 09/05/08 Location: Space Posts: 1,191	I started this as a few random lines back in April, I think...here's a draft (not quite sure if it's finished yet): [draft: 09.07.2010] so cursed this condemned wastrel searching for a way out breathe the silence as it abounds the atrophy so ashen from pain let it hurt the wrath let it consume the withering of blackened hands the sweet sacrifice the flashing of a life passing by the white noise of a life once had now obsolete and extinct
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08/10/10 6:02 PM
torturedpoet member Take me to your leader. Joined: 09/05/08 Location: Space Posts: 1,191	...another draft, this time with spaces: [draft: 16.07.2010] so cursed this condemned wastrel searching for a way out breathe the silence as it abounds the atrophy so ashen from pain let it hurt the wrath let it consume the withering of blackened hands the sweet sacrifice the flashing of a life passing by the white noise of a life once had now obsolete and extinct
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10/04/10 11:28 PM
torturedpoet member Take me to your leader. Joined: 09/05/08 Location: Space Posts: 1,191	Something I started last month, still haven't finished it yet: [started 12/8/10] >...[I will watch/to watch] you bleed... >...[and] deteriorate... >...[to be] cast... >...[in the] [waters/river] of [decay/flesh/pain] >...the taste of flesh... >...what are you waiting for? >...don’t you feel it? >...forge... >...the flesh... >...[the/and] bone... [line added approx. 8/10/10] >...it all [seems/seemed] so real... Edited 1 time(s). Last edit at 11/01/2010 10:40PM by torturedpoet.
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11/01/10 10:44 PM
torturedpoet member Take me to your leader. Joined: 09/05/08 Location: Space Posts: 1,191	More ill-defined lines: [started: 27/10/10] >...[little/ghastly/ghostly] voices inside [the/my] head... >...[fallen/falling/broken] bones... [line added 9/11/10] >...[the] sweet isolation... Edited 1 time(s). Last edit at 02/19/2011 09:50PM by torturedpoet.
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02/19/11 9:51 PM
torturedpoet member Take me to your leader. Joined: 09/05/08 Location: Space Posts: 1,191	More of the same: [started: 9/12/10] >...I am the war... >...everywhere the battlefield... >...everyone my enemy... >...reality my dream...
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03/01/11 9:32 PM
torturedpoet member Take me to your leader. Joined: 09/05/08 Location: Space Posts: 1,191	Something I started yesterday evening: [started: 1/3/11] >...I need you... >...stop me shaking... >...[lost/frozen] in time... >...the wounds that self inflict... >...all these voices [in my head]... >...tell me it’s okay... >...[I/they/it] [can’t/won’t] stop... >...no mercy... [lines added 8/3/11] >...all the blood... >...all the sweat... >...all the tears... >...in this hole ... >...in the end... [line added 9/3/11] >...it had to end [like this/in this way], didn’t it?... [lines added 15/3/11] >...[make/made] [you/me/us] disappear... >...left [you/me] [us all] behind... >...[time to] face the facts... Edited 3 time(s). Last edit at 03/15/2011 02:59PM by torturedpoet.
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03/19/11 9:09 PM
torturedpoet member Take me to your leader. Joined: 09/05/08 Location: Space Posts: 1,191	A draft of the lines posted above: [draft: 20.03.2011] I need you To stop me shaking So lost and frozen in time All the wounds that self inflict All these voices They’re in my head They tell me it’s okay I can’t end like this They won’t stop It won’t stop No mercy All the blood All the sweat All the tears In this hole In the end It had to end like this, didn’t it? It had to end in this way Make them disappear I made you disappear It made me disappear They made us disappear Left you behind Left me behind Left us all behind And now, Time to face the facts
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05/11/11 11:28 PM
torturedpoet member Take me to your leader. Joined: 09/05/08 Location: Space Posts: 1,191	Need a name for the ^above^ draft...please feel free to offer any ideas/criticism =p
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01/18/12 11:30 PM
torturedpoet member Take me to your leader. Joined: 09/05/08 Location: Space Posts: 1,191	Started this in November, but I forgot to put it in here: [started: 1/8/11] >...don’t [ever] deny me my freedom... >...don’t ever deny me my right to live... >...what I need... >...[my inner peace] >...[it’s/to be] exploited... >...by you... >...my puppet master... >...[this is not] a way to live... [lines added 3/8/11] >...lied to me... >...you put me through this... >...you did this to me... >...lost everything...
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01/18/12 11:31 PM
torturedpoet member Take me to your leader. Joined: 09/05/08 Location: Space Posts: 1,191	Started this one about half an hour ago: [started: 19/01/12] >...I was the one... >...who took the blame for you... >...I was the one... >...who took the bullet for you... >...you were the one... >...who made me do it again... >...I am the one... >...who will never be the same...
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01/18/12 11:32 PM
torturedpoet member Take me to your leader. Joined: 09/05/08 Location: Space Posts: 1,191	I have a lot of unfinished drafts and lines...
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01/19/12 12:36 PM
pieceofnothing member Truthseeker Joined: 07/25/10 Location: Here.Now Posts: 344	Endings are just new beginnings anyway.
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01/22/12 12:50 PM
torturedpoet member Take me to your leader. Joined: 09/05/08 Location: Space Posts: 1,191	^I suppose that's true :-) Random lines from the other day: [random 19/01/12] >...you made me believe... >...tortured beyond recognition... [line added 20/01/12] >...doing your bidding... [line added 10/02/12] >...as a martyr... Edited 1 time(s). Last edit at 02/10/2012 03:22PM by torturedpoet.
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02/18/12 1:55 PM
torturedpoet member Take me to your leader. Joined: 09/05/08 Location: Space Posts: 1,191	Started this one on my phone: [started: 16/02/12] >...leech... >...suck the life... >...leech... >...sap the strength... [line added: 18/02/12] >...waste...
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03/11/12 1:59 PM
torturedpoet member Take me to your leader. Joined: 09/05/08 Location: Space Posts: 1,191	Started this on Friday night: [started: 09/03/12] >...take me to a place... >...where I can feel... >...[make me real]... >...[feed my need]... >...where I can’t come back... >...take me down... >...[down and out]... >...[deep] underground... >...where I feel alive...
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08/13/12 4:58 PM
torturedpoet member Take me to your leader. Joined: 09/05/08 Location: Space Posts: 1,191	[started: 28/07/12] >...as the fog starts to clear... >...cleanse my [mortal/tortured] soul... >...I know they are watching...
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03/13/13 2:02 AM

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03/25/13 1:25 AM

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Wallpaper I created with the above poem:

http://i719.photobucket.com/albums/ww197/m_watson_photos/I4Mphonelandscaperedo4small.jpg

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