Random Chat Episode 5: The Randomness Strikes Back
 
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05/16/09 11:49 PM

nanettecarton posted:
hooforhesus posted:
nanettecarton posted:
Hi Hoof! Finally, won't be talking to myself again.
Wait. ummm, Mariners, who, what? Sports?

Hey Nanette! The Mariners are Seattle's baseball team and they make a career out of almost winning.

How are you?
You are always so kind to ask! I am good, had a great night. How about you? Sounds like ya had fun yourself.

I'm alright, thanks for asking. My toe is slowly making a recovery, which is good. I limped around and played frisbee with some friends today.

By the way, the thread title is the name of the topic, in this case, 'Random Chat Episode 5: The Randomness Strikes Back.' Most forums call topics or discussions 'threads.'

 

05/17/09 12:01 AM

I'm glad your feeling better! Thanks for the update.
Still playing Mass Effect?

 

05/17/09 12:02 AM

nanettecarton posted:
Hi Peli-Senpei

o hai there! smiling smiley

 

05/17/09 12:04 AM

Peligro posted:
nanettecarton posted:
Hi Peli-Senpei

o hai there! smiling smiley
Long time, no speak, how are ya?

 

05/17/09 12:16 AM

nanettecarton posted:
I'm glad your feeling better! Thanks for the update.
Still playing Mass Effect?

I beat it! Then, after weeping openly that Mass Effect 2 doesn't come out for another year, I beat Fallout 3 as well. Now since it's nice out I'm taking a break from video games in favor of frisbee.

 

05/17/09 12:16 AM

nanettecarton posted:
Peligro posted:
nanettecarton posted:
Hi Peli-Senpei

o hai there! smiling smiley
Long time, no speak, how are ya?

I'm fine, chillin in my own humidly heated demise of bordem while i keep going on and off about keeping on track on doing this story I'm working on all the while becoming tired. When I sleep, I hope to have a TR dream. <3

And how are you? :3

 

05/17/09 12:28 AM

hooforhesus posted:
nanettecarton posted:
I'm glad your feeling better! Thanks for the update.
Still playing Mass Effect?

I beat it! Then, after weeping openly that Mass Effect 2 doesn't come out for another year, I beat Fallout 3 as well. Now since it's nice out I'm taking a break from video games in favor of frisbee.
Don't blame you for getting out in the fresh air but as a gamer myself, I know the drama, I think I said this before... your M.E. is my Final Fantasy XIII. Pure mental bliss! I only get to play once or twice a week, really, that is enough.

 

05/17/09 12:37 AM

Peligro posted:
nanettecarton posted:
Peligro posted:
nanettecarton posted:
Hi Peli-Senpei

o hai there! smiling smiley
Long time, no speak, how are ya?

I'm fine, chillin in my own humidly heated demise of bordem while i keep going on and off about keeping on track on doing this story I'm working on all the while becoming tired. When I sleep, I hope to have a TR dream. <3

And how are you? :3
Your so sweet Peli-kun! Why are you suffering the heat?
With all your stories, I would think you have a book to publish.
In case you fall asleep before reading this, wishing you sweet TR dreams!

 

05/17/09 12:43 AM

And how are you? :3

Fine, thanks! Just trying to keep up with house work and the garden.

 

05/17/09 12:45 AM

Actually, sleep sounds pretty good...

Sorry to abandon you again nanette! sad smiley

 

05/17/09 12:51 AM

hooforhesus posted:
Actually, sleep sounds pretty good...

Sorry to abandon you again nanette! sad smiley

No worries Hoof! Sweet dreams!

Man, it's almost 3am! here.

 

05/17/09 12:55 AM

nanettecarton posted:
Peligro posted:
nanettecarton posted:
Peligro posted:
nanettecarton posted:
Hi Peli-Senpei

o hai there! smiling smiley
Long time, no speak, how are ya?

I'm fine, chillin in my own humidly heated demise of bordem while i keep going on and off about keeping on track on doing this story I'm working on all the while becoming tired. When I sleep, I hope to have a TR dream. <3

And how are you? :3
Your so sweet Peli-kun! Why are you suffering the heat?
With all your stories, I would think you have a book to publish.
In case you fall asleep before reading this, wishing you sweet TR dreams!

Well, the room that the computer is in is very hot. And, since the fan in here doesn't work, I'll have to bake while the ac vents are trying to blow it all off while from the door entrance, which is pretty far.

And I think I should get some sharper way to tell a story before getting published. So far, I'm only good at writing character profiles and story plots. Here's an example of a story plot:


"Abai Ff Heif"/"Star Of Zero" Story Plot
"Set fourteen years before the start of the story, a father sends his only child to the past from a horrible future of war and crime in 2022. After going back into the future, he ages his daughter's body to that of a fourteen year old in front of Izumi's Shelter Of The Orphaned. This girl is Eiee Hief/Nine Zero. And, as she grows up to how she was aged to be, an evil Corporation begins to pollute the land with their alternative of Parepin and Opal, -* and -*. The only person that isn't affected by all of this is Eiee herself, since her body is not at it's natural true form yet.

While living the Shelter with four other girls inside of a room with grass for a floor that has a tree in it, Eiee had lived her first ten years being verbally bullied around by those around her in the neighborhood, in school and in the chat rooms of -*, a new chat and forum on the Internet that's actually created by those that made the Parapin and Opal knockoffs possible known as -*.

And, admist the heavy flow and growing reliances of -*, A warning was made to those that chat online about the Abai Ff Hief, Star Of Zero. This Star is supposed to find a person to take it's place in being the new Abai Ff Hief. If a Chosen City doesn't have such person or if that Chosen Person isn't what he or she used to be before the Officer Of Zero arriverd, that City and the person is destroyed. But, if there's a Chosen Person and another worthy person in the same City, a challenge will be made to see which one is truly the Chosen One and not someone out to save him or herself from the future doom of 2022.

The Star Of Zero always changes Members once every nine years and by the time Eiee officially reaches fourteen, it would be a new nine year stretch."

I haven't officially made up a name for the Coporation nor the knockoff drugs for Opal and Parapin. And, as you can see, it was originally supposed to be a YZ fanfiction but I decided to somewhat not make it a complete fanficiton.

 

05/17/09 1:02 AM

Damn! Peli, in my opinion you have the workings of a unique story here. Don't let it get away from you, if ya can help it!

 

05/17/09 1:13 AM

I actually like this one, so I won't give it up that easily. :3

I just need help on the corp and the drugs.

 

05/17/09 1:22 AM

Peli, nice plot line there!
*also wrote fiction based on YZ*

 

05/17/09 1:30 AM

o_O

 

05/17/09 1:38 AM

Acharis posted:
Peli, nice plot line there!
*also wrote fiction based on YZ*

TY, it's only 3%ly based on YZ(the drugs, the year setting and the war thing). If only I knew what to call the drugs and the corp. X|||

 

05/17/09 1:39 AM

CharmlessMan posted:
o_O

What?

 

05/17/09 1:42 AM

**runs**

 

05/17/09 1:46 AM

Peligro posted:
Acharis posted:
Peli, nice plot line there!
*also wrote fiction based on YZ*

TY, it's only 3%ly based on YZ(the drugs, the year setting and the war thing). If only I knew what to call the drugs and the corp. X|||
Well, actually, mine was the same really >_>
I'd just written a short story & threw in some YZ references (Opal, the BoM) to see how they worked, they did & yeah.

Try looking at what the drugs/corp's DO, then take keywords from their primary function, run those through a thesaurus, then take some results from that & try doing shit with them (translating them to another language, making acronyms, referencing mythology, etc)

 

05/17/09 1:58 AM

Acharis posted:
Peligro posted:
Acharis posted:
Peli, nice plot line there!
*also wrote fiction based on YZ*

TY, it's only 3%ly based on YZ(the drugs, the year setting and the war thing). If only I knew what to call the drugs and the corp. X|||
Well, actually, mine was the same really >_>
I'd just written a short story & threw in some YZ references (Opal, the BoM) to see how they worked, they did & yeah.

Try looking at what the drugs/corp's DO, then take keywords from their primary function, run those through a thesaurus, then take some results from that & try doing shit with them (translating them to another language, making acronyms, referencing mythology, etc)

O_O Wow, chari-chan.... you know your stuff.

And what was the story about?

 

05/17/09 2:07 AM

Danke! Hope you can think of something!

It was about this woman who had to hunt down this double agent (who was working for both the bureau & the resistance, while selling both out to one another) & kill him. I made it deliberatly ambiguous as to exactly who had contracted her for the hit.

 

05/17/09 2:10 AM

^ That sounds very interesting! smiling bouncing smiley

 

05/17/09 2:24 AM

I think I posted it in my lj a few years ago (but the YZ referrences were lost on most of my friends)

 

05/17/09 2:27 AM

Dude, no way!

 

05/17/09 2:37 AM

Way.

tongue sticking out smiley

 

05/17/09 2:39 AM

omg omg new thread. *rolls in it*

 

05/17/09 2:44 AM

hawt

 

05/17/09 2:49 AM

Acharis posted:
Way.

tongue sticking out smiley

I'd like to read it! <3

 

05/17/09 2:57 AM

If you look back through my entries, I think it was November 2007.
It was this writing challenge I did (it really wasn't very good at all, I also wrote it in one night <_<winking smiley

 
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